Facebook landing page?

Sad to admit, but this took just about all day to create... and I'm still not even sure I like it? What do you guys think, if this was the first thing you saw when you heard of us on Facebook, would it make you want to "Like" us?!
(Any input is appreciated, even if it's as critical as my own views.)
Thanks! xo

Landing page final b

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